Wednesday, February 8, 2012

The Beach.


Unexpectedly the great strength of the wind blew me away roughly. My teeth chattered. It was a blue day and my body felt numb. Shivering and freezing, I grabbed my beach bag and pulled out my blanket as fast as I could. I wrapped it around me.  I was quivering and I just couldn’t take it anymore.


Thanks to this link for letting me use their image.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mubasshira,
    What an AWESOME paragraph about a cold day at the beach. I like how described what you were feeling and the amazing vocabulary you used. It feels like I was there right next to you! Good work Mubasshira.

    From Seini-Mino

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